Okay, that so can not be the end of it. No, no, no. Tell me this was not meant to be a three-parter. I need some resolution. Pleeeeeeeze...
Yeah, this chapter rang true. Really good. I'm so happy Claire isn't all sweet and loving. I'm so glad they're acting like real people. Thank you thank you thank you. Great job. And I like that Claire's less upset about the drugs than she is about being lied to. I really, truly think that's the way it would happen. She wasn't so upset about it when she learned of it the first time; when she got mad at him, it was because of the way he treated her, and that's what's so great about your story--that's exactly why she's mad at him. Keep going.
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Yeah, this chapter rang true. Really good. I'm so happy Claire isn't all sweet and loving. I'm so glad they're acting like real people. Thank you thank you thank you. Great job. And I like that Claire's less upset about the drugs than she is about being lied to. I really, truly think that's the way it would happen. She wasn't so upset about it when she learned of it the first time; when she got mad at him, it was because of the way he treated her, and that's what's so great about your story--that's exactly why she's mad at him. Keep going.