ah, you see you didn't say suggestions for this verse did you? lol.
Seriously though, I love this verse and would love to see you carry it on a little while. You do it so well, so I'd love to see you get them to a point where he actually CAN admit how he feels.
In the meantime though, how about somewhere really cold and snowy after all the fun and frolics? might make a nice contrast?
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2012-01-28 09:42 am (UTC)Seriously though, I love this verse and would love to see you carry it on a little while. You do it so well, so I'd love to see you get them to a point where he actually CAN admit how he feels.
In the meantime though, how about somewhere really cold and snowy after all the fun and frolics? might make a nice contrast?