Wow. Wow. Wow. I was so happy when I saw this and it did not disappoint. It is still my very favorite Rose in HN/FoB story and it is up against some other really stellar ones. I love your characterization of the Doctor in this, he is such a moron but it is so believable that he would act just like that and say exactly those things and be totally bewildered by Rose's reactions. I love every word of it! And I can't wait for the last chapter. I don't even know what I want to have happen any more I just know I can't wait to see what you come up with.