That was... a really good chapter. After reading the other comments I agree with the original ethical dilema with John, but I aslo like the ethical dilema you presented with Rose, and how John did a very good job of pressuring her into sex. You managed to walk a very fine line and do it beautifully.
I'm looking forward to more! (and yays for more angst! It's depressing but feels good for the soul in a very masochistic sort of way...)
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That was... a really good chapter. After reading the other comments I agree with the original ethical dilema with John, but I aslo like the ethical dilema you presented with Rose, and how John did a very good job of pressuring her into sex. You managed to walk a very fine line and do it beautifully.
I'm looking forward to more! (and yays for more angst! It's depressing but feels good for the soul in a very masochistic sort of way...)