it's a lovely story, but mostly I'm impressed that you managed to write such an intimate scene as "smell me" (he had her nose pressed against his neck! I wouldn't have been able to resist taking a little taste, if it were me. Geez) without any sexual tension, as the moment's ripe for it. So.... bravo? I guess?
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Date: 2009-01-26 01:51 pm (UTC)