Originally I had a really intense shippy moment where he could smell the honey on her breath. He didn't kiss her, but he shut his eyes and breathed in her breath. Unfortunately that's not the direction this fic decided to go in but nemind.

I really like writing Jackie - she's a very funny character. I'd love to write more of her actually, especially her with the Doctor, they absolutely crack me up.

It's such a huge fandom with a massive history, doubtless you'll run across a few more snags like that. At least there's awesome sites like that which do help out n00b writers in the fandom like us huh? Remember if you need someone to bounce any more ideas off for that fic then feel free to poke me =)