Oh yes,this is just perfect - I love how you've captured the exhilaration of this scene through his thoughts and feelings.
"This is the first time in his long, long life that he’s ever run towards something, to someone." This is inspired: a brief and simple statement, but very powerful in its implication, and something I hadn't really grasped until now.
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Date: 2009-01-22 07:33 am (UTC)"This is the first time in his long, long life that he’s ever run towards something, to someone."
This is inspired: a brief and simple statement, but very powerful in its implication, and something I hadn't really grasped until now.