ext_228278 ([identity profile] pendora-lass.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sapphire_child 2008-05-05 08:18 pm (UTC)

I was determined not cry reading this, and yet, here I go again. Very bittersweet this one, Ell. I especially like this line:

It seems ironic – in the bitterest sense of the word – that I should finally have a family, fall head over heels for them and then have to give it all up again so that I can save them.

I think that's how a lot of us fans felt as well. Just when it seemed that C/C/A were finally coming together and COULD be a family, they were torn apart.

I really like the way you wrote the last paragraph, as well. It's nice to remember that moment in the episode and envision your take on what exactly Charlie was thinking/seeing at that moment.

Great work as usual!

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