You did such a good job at portraying pre-island Charlie here. Those sections are so raw and real-seeming and his voice is crystal clear. I've never been much of a Charlie/Claire shipper (obviously), but the contrast between the last section and the others worked perfectly. Very sad too. So much life that he didn't get to live. *sniff*
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Date: 2008-05-18 07:28 am (UTC)