LOL. I feel so much more comfortable writing smut now than I ever was before. Once upon a time I used to base my smut mainly off other stories that I'd read because the honest truth was that I honestly didn't have much experience up my sleeve
Well, I've only written Charlie smut once (his fucked up threesome with Bonnie and Greta). I actually had an idea for a m/m non-con story that was gonna be set mid-S2 when Charlie was camping alone far away from the rest of the camp. I was gonna have an OC who comes to Charlie's tent and rapes him one night. And then the very angsty situation of Charlie not feeling like he can tell anyone it has happened cos the whole camp is against him but being frightened that it will happen again. It's one of those fics where I'm attracted to the angst but scared by the rape element which I think is a very brave thing for you to write.
Hey yeah - nice catch there! Whoot - I am unintentionally brilliant!
Actually as well as parts 2&4 mirroring each other, I thought 1&3 had strong parallels too - in the first one Charlie's girlfriend is hurt by her first experience of sex and in the third one its Charlie who is hurt by his first experience of penitration. In parts 1&2 it feels like Charlie has a more dominant male sexual role, then in parts 3&4 he takes the more submissive role and seems rather like an abused female. Then when you get to the Claire section Charlie feels almost asexual, like gender roles aren't important any more because their relationship doesn't have a sexual agenda.
You're welcome to the detailed feedback. You wrote a very thought provoking fic so it's nice to discuss it at length.
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Date: 2008-04-11 06:21 pm (UTC)Well, I've only written Charlie smut once (his fucked up threesome with Bonnie and Greta). I actually had an idea for a m/m non-con story that was gonna be set mid-S2 when Charlie was camping alone far away from the rest of the camp. I was gonna have an OC who comes to Charlie's tent and rapes him one night. And then the very angsty situation of Charlie not feeling like he can tell anyone it has happened cos the whole camp is against him but being frightened that it will happen again. It's one of those fics where I'm attracted to the angst but scared by the rape element which I think is a very brave thing for you to write.
Hey yeah - nice catch there! Whoot - I am unintentionally brilliant!
Actually as well as parts 2&4 mirroring each other, I thought 1&3 had strong parallels too - in the first one Charlie's girlfriend is hurt by her first experience of sex and in the third one its Charlie who is hurt by his first experience of penitration. In parts 1&2 it feels like Charlie has a more dominant male sexual role, then in parts 3&4 he takes the more submissive role and seems rather like an abused female. Then when you get to the Claire section Charlie feels almost asexual, like gender roles aren't important any more because their relationship doesn't have a sexual agenda.
You're welcome to the detailed feedback. You wrote a very thought provoking fic so it's nice to discuss it at length.