I found Claire creepy here (I don't know if that was your intention?)
Ehhh...a little bit. I did take particular note of that line and the mirroring with Charlie. I think my muse was channeling S4 Claire in this *makes a face* and I'm not entirely sure why tbh. Her only saving grace I think is that in this she's not really happy and Sawyer can see it but he doesn't really comment on it because he's uncomfortable with it.
It's like Claire isn't missing Charlie on an emotional level, she's simply missing all Charlie's little services that she had grown accustomed to.
That's what it feels like on the show atm a little bit you know? Honestly, I just want to grab Claire by the shoulders and shake her around, maybe hit her across the head a couple of times, knock some sense into her...
Oh the fic. Right.
I don't like Claire much either atm. Like I said, I don't know WHY I was channeling her on-show persona because I really don't like her much atm but the muse commands me to write so I do!
Thank you for reading and reviewing even though I creeped you out =P
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Date: 2008-03-13 02:13 pm (UTC)Ehhh...a little bit. I did take particular note of that line and the mirroring with Charlie. I think my muse was channeling S4 Claire in this *makes a face* and I'm not entirely sure why tbh. Her only saving grace I think is that in this she's not really happy and Sawyer can see it but he doesn't really comment on it because he's uncomfortable with it.
It's like Claire isn't missing Charlie on an emotional level, she's simply missing all Charlie's little services that she had grown accustomed to.
That's what it feels like on the show atm a little bit you know? Honestly, I just want to grab Claire by the shoulders and shake her around, maybe hit her across the head a couple of times, knock some sense into her...
Oh the fic. Right.
I don't like Claire much either atm. Like I said, I don't know WHY I was channeling her on-show persona because I really don't like her much atm but the muse commands me to write so I do!
Thank you for reading and reviewing even though I creeped you out =P