ext_21676 ([identity profile] slybrunette.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sapphire_child 2007-10-31 12:21 pm (UTC)

Jack’s like the energizer bunny on speed.

LOL. Sorry that line just makes me laugh. Entirely seperate from the actual review.

This totally works well with Claire. I too have found that it's easier to write kind of darker stuff with Claire -- she's easier for me to get into anyway, regardless of any feelings I have toward her on the show, so I really loved this. Her being envious of Shannon fits perfectly with the show and the kind of hints that they showed in the pilot, which is why I think that's my favorite.

Awesome job!

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