I am doing another challenge! This was one of those ideas that just came and jumped into my brain and begged to be written. I'm so stoked, I'm getting my muse back again!
it works here because you're not trying to turn morality on its head - exactly. I wanted to convey Claire's confusion as to who really was the bad guy. She sort of comes to the conclusion that Ethan is technically bad with good points and Charlie is the other way around but she's still a little scared of the darkness in Charlie, that it might come back again.
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Date: 2007-10-23 01:37 am (UTC)it works here because you're not trying to turn morality on its head - exactly. I wanted to convey Claire's confusion as to who really was the bad guy. She sort of comes to the conclusion that Ethan is technically bad with good points and Charlie is the other way around but she's still a little scared of the darkness in Charlie, that it might come back again.