http://noblealice.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] noblealice.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sapphire_child 2006-10-30 06:11 pm (UTC)

I really like how you've managed to convey how much more comfortable they have become and their physical contact has relfected that.

His touch now however was light, warm, feather soft – something you don’t really expect from someone with such a gravely voice and scruffy appearance.

I love that line because it perfectly describes how I view Charlie: someone who LOOKS scruffy but is really soft.

And how much do I love you for the staring-leading-to-a-kiss? It was just sooooo sweet. *sigh*

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